Thursday, April 21, 2011

I listen

i called
she e-mailed
i called back
her angry ex interrupted
service was lost
she e-mailed
i responded
she called
i listened
she answered question unasked
he whips her
she moans
he penetrates
she cums
then she tells me
but
as she tells
she touches
I listen
she sighs
I instruct
she complies
she begs
I tease
she begs again
i command
she asks permission
and i grant her request
and i listen......

9 comments:

David said...

No as, while or with, just the essentials, nicely done.

Mrs Discontented said...

This is really hot, simple to the point but has the perfect effect.

That Girl said...

oh my...you do have a way with words. i like this.

Drenchxoxo said...

so sexy
hot even
erotically written
ponders some

Advizor54 said...

Thank you all. It was simple, powerful, direct, wonderful....

As she is.

Redhead said...

Whew. Is it hot in here or is it just me

Advizor54 said...

Thanks Red, I'm happy to turn up the heat. And what's up? no profile? we want to know you too.

Heaven said...

i enjoyed this short prose...

more please~

Advizor54 said...

Thanks Heaven, I like seeing your name around now. xoxo