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Where are you?
I’m not sure, but I’m kind of happy.
Darla, you have to tell me, where you are?
Why?
So I can come get you!
But I don’t want to leave, I’m warm and soft and it’s such a pretty pink.
Darla! Snap out of it!
I don’t want to go, I’m surrounded by color and light, and it feels so good….I think I might cum
What?
Ooooooh, Frankie, I’m going to cum Frankieeeeeeeee!
Darla!
Oh Frank, it’s wonderful in here.
Where is “here” sweetheart?
Frank, I think….I think I’m in my vagina!
Frank shook his head and strapped her to the gurney and patted the ambulance door. Another batch of crystalline meth gone bad. What a waste, and a pretty one too.
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Commentary to follow, if I get to it.
I think the picture is pretty, but it didn't lead me anywhere for a while, but now?
Well, let's just say a news story and a pretty girl gave me a tragically good idea.
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5 comments:
Erotic and creative..
Interesting. Hadn't thought of meth. LSD, yes, but not meth. Guess I'm showing my age.
I, too, wrote about a drug trip. The word "crystalline" made me think crystal meth, but from what little I know of meth I wasn't sure it fit. I went with Ketamine instead.
Can't blame a girl for not wanting to leave a pretty pink!! I read the other takes before this earlier *ahem* one, and I have to say I prefer this one here. Not that the others aren't good, this one is just... cuter? :)
1ManView - Thank you, it nice to have you drop by for a read.
WordWytch - I haven't tried either, and Meth may not behave this way at all, but it's the only drug that had "crystal" in it's name.
J&J - Maybe we can do meth, lose our teeth, and start a jail house blog together. Or not. I don't know Ketamine either....
France - I think this was pretty cute too, I came up with the "I think I’m in my vagina" line early and then played with it. (The story, not my vagina).
To Everyone elseThanks to all those who dropped by, I'd love to hear from you as well. Even if you didn't like it....
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