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| 100-135 The scent of ...... |
The scent of desperation exuded from her underage skin.
“Get out of the car Michelle”
“Not until you fuck me,” her smile was almost innocent.
“For the 100th time, NO!” I was exasperated, but
hardening, “I’m in no mood for jail today.”
“But you want to Jonathon,” she purred like the engine as it
idled, “And I want you to too.” She
giggled at the alliteration and shifted her body on the seat.
She pulled herself to the window and reached out for my belt
buckle, the back of her hand grazing my obvious cock.
I should have pulled away.
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The scent of abandoned wood-working and forgotten projects
filled the old garage. The only reason
it still stood was to protect “the crime scene” from the elements and to serve
as a warning to sons who wanted to grow up “just like him.”
My phone buzzed and mom asked when I was coming back in to
the house. “Soon,” I replied.
I missed my dad terribly at times and I moved a box of dust-covered
engine parts so I could sit on his old stool by the workbench. I used to come here to curse him, but anger
fades, the rage passes, and you just wonder if banging the doe-eyed English
girl in the garage was worth it.
Walking back home, I dialed him up, “Dad, I have a question….”
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OK, now I have to go, kids are up, the clock is ticking, and I have to run to the store to get bacon for the King's special breakfast.
xoxo
Advizor
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7 comments:
Two perfect takes on the same prompt, and they're both totally unique. While the second story was the furthest thing from my mind when I was writing my own, I really love the first, as it reminds me a bit of my own. Like you, I went with the scent of desperation. It fit my story, and it nicely fits yours. Well done.
Yes say old car, I say new car....
Wow - #2 is dark, different, and unexpected. Great take.
Ram
The girl in the picture had "bad news" written all over her, so I took both takes that direction.
Ram, you'll find that "dark" with me is the rule, not the exception on Fridays...
Thanks to all for stopping by.
I liked these. :)
I enjoyed both of these. Sorry it's taken me so long to get here. Can we safe life intruded? Betcha can. :)
LL - I'm so glad to hear from you! Glad you liked the stories too.
Word - Take all the time you need. I'm not going anywhere.
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