ME: I hope you are having a good day @ work. I'm looking forward to dinner with the Andersons.
Her: Me too, we are on for 7:00, Sheri made reservations
ME: Tie?
Her: No, but long sleeve shirt
ME: I want to take a pill before we go.
Her: Seriously? We don't have time.
Me: I want to make time.
Her: Why?
Me: Because I want to be dripping down your thigh as we walk into the restaurant. I want you to catch your breath from tenderness when you sit down. I want to shake his hand with your fragrance on my skin. When you and Sheri inevitably visit the restroom together, I want her to see you wiping yourself clean.
Her: You are disgusting.
I know you think that, that's why I'll never send this text.
You have to give me
permission
To
do what?
What ever it is you are
about to ask me to do.
I
don’t know what you are talking about.
Yes you do. You are about to ask for a favor, I can feel
it.
Why
would I do that?
Because you husband is
out of town and
you are wearing your yellow dress.
What
does that have to do with anything?
You never wear panties
under that dress.
How
do you know that?
Because he told me.
He
What?
He told me. He tells me a lot of things. He likes to brag.
About
what?
About how hot you are,
how good you are in bed
What
else?
He tells me how much he
misses you when you are gone.
Does
he, you know…. While I’m gone?
Cheat on you? No.
That’s
not what I meant.
Be specific.
Does
he, you know (imitates masturbation motions)
No, strangely enough,
he doesn’t. That’s why
he’s always at the gym when you call him.
Maybe
that’s why he’s losing weight. (Laughter)
Do you?
What? I’m not going to tell.
Yes you are. Do you masturbate while you are on the road?
Does
my answer matter?
It does to me.
Why?
Because I like thinking
about you doing it.
Doing
what? (sarcastically) Be Specific.
I like thinking about
you masturbating, naked, spread, wet,
on a hotel bed, cumming, cumming again, and then,
spreading the slippery wet on your nipples as you play with them.
Oh.
My
What’s wrong? Didn’t you like my answer?
Why
are you suddenly standing so close to me?
I didn’t move, you did.
No
I didn’t, that would be inappropriate.
(Laughing) That is exactly
what you are.
I
don’t want to be. I want to be a good
girl.
Will you be “my” good
girl?
I
hate that phrase.
Why?
Because
I’m not a girl.
What are you?
A
woman.
What kind of woman?
A
lonely woman.
Lonely? I thought you two were pretty “active.”
Not
enough
Be specific
You
like that phrase, don’t you?
Yes. I like it when
people use words.
What
kind of words?
Accurate words. Honest
words.
What
do you want me to say?
You can say anything
you want. I don’t direct anything.
Seriously? That’s not what I’ve heard.
Heard? From who?
People
Which people.
Will
you get mad at her?
No
Promise?
Promise. I put no restrictions
on anyone. Including you.
Feel free to share
what you want with whomever you want.
Even
him?
Him who?
Even
my husband?
Is this something you
want to share with him?
Kind
of.
Does he know you are here?
No.
Why did you hide it
from him?
He’s my best friend.
That’s
just it, isn’t it? You are best friends,
you work together, what if this goes badly?
Will it?
Will
you fuck off with all the questions?
You really aren’t that deep, you know.
I don’t need to be
deep, just honest,
open, and with full consent.
She
told that consent is like a kink for you.
It is, in a way. I like to hear my partners ask for things,
specific things.
I don’t want any misunderstandings,
accusations,
or bad feelings.
What
if I feel bad afterward?
That is up to you, but
it will never be because
I pressured you into anything.
Like
what?
Ah, see, very
tricky. I’m not in the lead here.
I am in charge, but not in the lead, do you
understand?
I
think so.
Nothing will happen
that I don’t want to have happen,
but nothing will happen unless you ask for it.
And see, now? You’ve taken another step closer.
Shall I set your drink down?
Yes,
thank you, it was delicious. What was in
it?
No alcohol, if you are
asking.
No intoxicant, no drugs,
just clear-headed
decision making.
I
don’t think I’m thinking very clearly right now.
Then should we stop? Watch
TV?
Discuss the Old Testament?
(Laughter)
No,
but maybe some music.
Something slow?
Slow
and sad or slow and sexy.
They are frequently
both. True. How about this?
I
like it, thanks.
You’ll have to take off
your heels,
you are beautiful, but too tall for me.
You
like it when I wear them.
How do you know?
You
smile at me in church.
I smile at many people at
church,
I’m happy to be there.
Especially
since you have seen so many of us naked.
Horrible scandalous rumors.
I say.
Sometimes I close my eyes.
Dance
with me.
You smell wonderful,
and yes,
I love you in your heels, but you fit so nicely
into my arms without them.
Hold
me closer.
Tiny Dancer?
Yes,
hold me tight. It feels nice
Yes, it does, doesn’t
it?
Let’s
just enjoy the music for a bit, eh?
That would be lovely….
Oh,
I love this song.
So does my wife, they
played it her sister’s wedding.
Can
we not talk about her tonight?
My wife’s little
sister?
(Laughter)
No, your wife
Why not?
Am
I betraying her?
No.
Does
she know I’m here?
She knows I’m with a
friend. She never asks for names.
Does
she mind?
No, we discussed it
early on, her idea really,
caught me quite by surprise.
Do
you two…?
Do we what? You know the rules?
Do
you and your wife have sex anymore?
On special occasions.
Like
what?
The return of Halley’s
Comet, the orbit of Pluto, those special days.
I’m
sorry
Do not be. I have
friends.
Like
me?
Yes Dear, like you.
Spin
me.
Like this?
(Laughter)
Well, I proved my
assumption
Which
one.
That you don’t wear
panties under this dress.
No,
I never do
Why not?
Because
I don’t have to.
(Kiss)
That was lovely
(Kiss
with a hint of tongue, teasingly bringing our mouths together)
Touch
me
Where?
Do
I have to tell you everything?
For now, yes. Keeps us both safe.
Touch
my ass.
You’ve been going to
the gym?
Squeeze
harder.
Wonderful
Both
hands
Even better.
Spread
me.
Ohhhh, I like that.
Me
too….
Kiss
me
(kiss)
Kiss
me like you kiss Haley
(deeper
kissing)
Do
you fuck her?
Who?
Haley.
Does that matter/
Yes.
Why?
I
want to know what she likes
Why?
You
know.
Tell me
Because
I want to fuck her too.
Really? I assumed you already had.
Why?
Because of how she
looks at you.
I
know, it’s quite a rush.
Have you kissed her?
Not
like this
(Hard,
passionate kissing)
I don’t want tonight to
be about her.
Tonight is about you, us, right now, right here.
(I
bite her neck)
Yesssss.
Whispering - What
do you want?
Put
your hands under my dress
Your skin is flawless
Spread
me
Wider
Harder
Yessss, you are catching
on.
Touch
me
Catching
herself
Touch
me deep.
Like this?
Fuck
yes… he never touches me there.
He never touches this tight
Gasp
Little
Gasp
Hole?
No,
never, push hard, I want to feel it.
Inside?
Yes
Yes,
please
How far?
All the way
Like this?
Yes, yes, yes, please. That feels so good.
Do you play with your ass
when you are alone?
Yes, all
the time.
Does he know?
He thinks
it’s dirty
I do not.
Kiss me while it’s
inside?
(Her mouth opens and is ravenous. I press deeper
inside her, feeling the tightness and warmth. She quivers and bites my tongue.)
Oh fuck.
Do you like my finger in your ass?
YES! Deeper!
As you wish…
Knuckles
deep, she begins to buckle and gasp for air.
Are you cumming?
Yes! May I
Then cum
Her
body falls into my arms, and I hold her, still penetrating, thrusting, filling
her up in a way her husband never would.
Tragic really,
She’s perfect.
Oh, fuck fuck, that feels so good.
I’m glad you liked it.
Now, catch your breath, and follow me.
Where?
Just Follow
On
the far side of the room is a small bathroom with the appropriate supplies
What’s
all this for?
Cleanliness is next to
godliness and prevents all sorts of problems.
May I wash your hands for you?
Yes, that would be nice.
The
warm water runs over our hands as she pumps soap into our palms and rubs them
together.
I
dry my hands and cup her face.
I remember everything.
I
need to pee.
OK
Can I have some privacy?
No.
What do you mean, ‘No.’
Just that, no. Here, I’ll lift the lid for you.
And you are just going to stand there?
No, I’m going to watch.
Why?
Because I like it.
She
sits and lifts the yellow dress up over her hips.
I kneel in front of her.
Really?
Yes, Really. Breathe deeply,
relax.
I’m
trying.
With
gentle pressure, I spread her legs.
Interesting
What?
I always imagined you waxed.
He likes the landing strip.
Hmm
And
what do you mean,
“I always imagined you waxed”?
Do you think about me?
Constantly
Do you masturbate when you think of me?
Constantly
What’s your favorite scenario?
You call me and ask if you
can use my back yard
to “work on your tan, because you know I work
from home and my wife is in the office.
The
flow starts, warm and yellow, I spread her knees further.
I promise you privacy but
come to the kitchen sink
for a drink and you are laying out in your green bikini,
my favorite, you notice me, and ask for a drink.
Her
flow continues and I see her breathing quicken.
I give you a drink, but it spills
Her
flow stops.
I
take 4 squares of toilet paper and pat her lips dry.
Good hygiene is essential
Then what happens?
That can wait.
I
offer my hand, and she takes it and stands.
That
was interesting
Good
But I’m still a little
damp
And?
Wipe
me
I
reach for the toilet paper
She
blocks my hand
With
your fingers
Please say it
Wipe my lips clean, touch me.
Yes.
Aahhh, you are so wet, so
perfectly wet
Taste
it.
So sweet
Again
Not here
Why
not?
The couch is better
I said touch
me.
She
holds my wrist and guides me between her thighs.
Wipe
it all up.
Front to back, back to front, I’m so wet.
You are amazing
Penetrate
me
Ask again
Put your fingers inside me.
Again
Fuck
me!
My
fingers slip inside without any resistance, her smooth walls envelope my fingers
and I feel her clench around
Feed
them to me.
I
put my fingers in her mouth, and she tastes herself for the first time
Is
this how Haley tastes?
This is how you taste,
and it’s perfectly you.
She
pulls away, smiling, placing her hands on my shoulders to create distance.
Stay
here.
Why?
Because
Why?
Trust
me.
She
leaves the bathroom
My
cock strains against my slacks and I see a growing wet spot.
COME
OUT!
She
is standing in the middle of the room, naked, hands on hips.
Her
breasts are more spectacular than imagined
Her
landing strip groomed to perfection
A
long thin glistening bead runs down her inner thigh.
Well?
I
step toward her and kneed in front of her,
desperate to taste her fully.
No,
stay up.
OK
She
undresses me quickly but with practices hands
I
want you to see me in the light,
undressed, naked, all yours, not hiding,
no excuses, no justifications,
just two beautiful people naked and together.
You are beautiful
Look
at me.
I am
Tell me what you
see
I see my friend, naked,
beautiful, wet.
More
I see beautiful nipples that have fed two wonderful children. A hint of stretch marks as evidence of your motherhood, your fertility, your breeding. I see an ass that has inspired a thousand fantasies and even more orgasms. I see a friend who is about to suck my cock, a body I’m about to fuck, a woman who’s about to orgasm.
More
What do I see? What do I see? I see youth, energy, arousal. I see a wonderful mother, a shrewd businesswoman, a good boss, a wonderful friend. I see need and longing and love and unmet passion and I see love, friendship, desire, and bravery for being here with me.What
do you feel?
I
feel the tip of your cock on my stomach,
dripping, aching, slippery May I taste
it?
Please use the words.
May I taste your
cock?
Yes, please
Don’t beg.I want this too.
With
a smooth motion, she kneels and takes me into her mouth.
Her
tongue swirls around the swollen head, teasing, tasting, sucking.
I
want you to cum
We’ve just started!
CUM, now, in my mouth
Her
mouth engulfs me
I
see her hand pinching hard at her nipples, then harder, tugging, pulling
Then
it drifts between her legs and strums her clit in hard need.
(Muffled) – CUM!
I
don’t hold back.
FUCK!
I
feel my sac constrict and the inevitable rush of pleasure begins
I’m going to cum
She
looks up at me, making eye contact, and nods her head.
I
reach down and feel her breasts in my hands, holding, caressing, squeezing.
She
buries my cock deep in her throat, then gasps, coming up for air.
CUM!
Her
mouth goes back on me, her tongue swirling the tip.
I
thrust deeper but she holds me at bay and I understand.
I
cum.
Buckets,
shot after shot, my head swirls,
I can barely keep my feet,
her hands has an
iron grip on my sac
and she keeps me from pulling out
until I am
spent,
drained,
happy,
exhausted.
I
stagger backward and fall on to the couch.
She crawls over on her hands and knees,
licking her lips, tasting all of
my cum,
until she swallows, smiles,
and opens her mouth for me to see.
We
kiss.
It was amazing.
She
kisses me again and climbs up on the couch.
Her
bare skin is radiant, sweaty, glistening.
She
leans back on the arm of the couch, letting me, begging me to look at her.
That
was perfect…..
She
leans back and spreads her legs wide, her lips open, and she smiles again.
Perfect
for round one.
Big Goals
Be Creative
I wrote a short story which I actually shared with some people (yikes).
I started a longer narrative (sci fi) and a screenplay (ghost story)
Write More (500 words x day)
I wrote 20,987 words in January. This only counts create projects, not work or daily emails.
Blog more
I'm here, aren't I?
Play the piano
Not much progress here
Volunteer at theater more
I'm helping with three shows in April and May
Listen to 12 books
"We Who Wrestle with God" - Jordan Peterson
1984 - Audio Dramatization with Andrew Garfield
The Peripheral by William Gibson - In Progress
Get a 'real' job
Working on it
Watch what I eat (log everything!)
I have logged my food every day, though I did forget to add last night's pudding
Get outside more (4x a week workouts, 3 races)
I have worked out 4x a week every week so far. I ran 83 miles in January
Fuck more
Twice this month. Don't laugh, that's pretty good for us.
Cum more
Yes, so much yes.
Stay in touch with my friends
Eh. I'm not good at this.
Look better naked
Down 5 pounds in January!!!
The fires in SoCal are done thanks to some rain and a million firefighters. Thanks to all those (1) who checked in on me.
And yes, looking for a job sucks.
xoxo
Happy New Year!!!
2024 was, in a word, interesting.
Job Hunt, finding a contractor spot, kids doing kid things, a new grandbaby, a little travel, not enough sex, too many worries, not enough play, and watching too much TV and not writing here.
So, what about 2025?
Big Goals
Be Creative
Write More (500 words x day)
Blog more
Play the piano
Volunteer at theater more
Listen to 12 books
Get a 'real' job
Watch what I eat (log everything!)
Get outside more (4x a week workouts, 3 races)
Fuck more
Cum more
Stay in touch with my friends
Look better naked
What are you doing this year?
This was dictated on my phone, transcribed by poorly
programmed voice recognition software, then very lightly edited, just enough, I
hope, to get across the story. And yes, I finished when the story did. (some additional editing on 2/20/26).
Phone rings.
We need to talk about the tickets.
What are you doing right now?
Uh do you want the truthful answer or the politically
correct answer.
Give me the truthful answer.
Well I'm laying on a blanket in my backyard naked thinking
about masturbating.
Holy shit don't say that,.
Well you said you wanted the honest answer.
Ohh not that honest.
OK, so you want the politically correct answer?
Yeah, let's back up and try this again. Hi what are you
doing? We need to talk about the tickets.
Well, you can come over. I am currently in the backyard
thinking about some of my friends and hoping that they are satisfied with their
daily life.
Now, that is a bullshit answer.
Well it’s the the politically correct version and that means
it's usually bullshit.
That's not what I meant.
What you meant was that you really wanted to know what I was
doing but you didn’t want to admit that you wanted to know exactly, what I was
doing.
Don't put it that way.
Admit it, you're still curious you had your chance and now
you think you blew it.
.
Well, did I?
I'm not sure yet, all I know, is that right now I’m alone in
the backyard, no one can see me, no one knows how I'm doing. I have a tube of
lube and a vibrator next to me.
That's what I mean! You can't say that stuff anymore.
Why not? You used to like hearing it all the time.
I know, but I thought we were being good.
OH, fuck being good. That didn't get me anywhere now did it?
That's not my fault. I just I just couldn't go through with
it.
That's fine, just don't tell me you didn't want to.
That's not fair, you know I wanted to, you know I really
wanted to do it, but.
But what? Tony banging your best friend when we were on the
phone so I don't think it mattered too much. She's not my best friend anymore.
Good, neither is he. Just tell me the last time you thought
about me.
Please don't make me tell you that.
Why not? That recently?
You know what it does to me when we start talking, you know
how I get wet.
I know.
Stop it.
I think you're getting wet right now.
Stop it or i'll hang up.
Ohh you could have hung up minutes ago when I called you, you
like texting because it doesn't go anywhere but once you hear my voice you know
I'm gonna ask you questions.
Then stop asking me questions.
I like hearing you answer them.
Come on, that’s just not fair. You know what you do to me.
I know what I want to do to you.
See it’s stuff like that. We’re not supposed to talk about
that stuff with each other.
Why not?
Well, I'm your boss.
You're not my boss.
I paid for your last project.
Correction, you reimbursed me for my last project, all my
labor was free along with my expertise a couple of gallons of paint and several
dozen brushes if I remember.
OK fine, that might be true, but what about next day? What about
when we see each other next?
What's the problem?
You'll know things about me.
Like what?
Ohh come off it. You know. You ask questions and I tell you
answers and you know I can't lie to you.
There's no value in lying in this situation I'm not building
a fantasy; I’m building a record.
That's what I mean. You ask me these questions, and I have
to tell you the truth otherwise it doesn't work, does it?
You're right, it only works when you answer truthfully. I
can tell a fantasy answer when i hear it, just like a fake orgasm or porn. It's
beautiful, but it's a lie so it doesn't mean as much. Why do you think you like
telling me the truth?
I don't know, maybe because no one else asks me those kinds
of questions.
Well? Should we start with some answers right now?
What?
You know what my first three questions are. They are always
the same and I expect you to answer them 100% honestly.
Seriously? I have to go to rehearsal in like 2 hours.
That’s not the point.
Yeah, it is, because when you get to rehearsal I want you to
know that tingling you feel is because of me.
It's always because of you.
Then let's get started, give me the basic 3 now.
Fuck you.
Not yet, answers please.
OK, let me think.
You shouldn't have to think that hard, but you know the
rule, no looking.
It's just that sometimes they're just not that exciting.
If they're on you, then they're absolutely thrilling.
OK, pale blue, high cut, probably Fruit of the Loom and a
little bit worn out.
Good girl.
You can’t call me that for just answering the simplest of
questions.
I can because that's what you are.
What do you mean?
You are my good girl. You answer my questions, you tell me
the truth, you let me inside and that makes all the difference.
Inside? What do you mean? We've never, you know, never done,
you know, that.
That's the least important place I need to be right now.
What do you mean?
You'll let me in there when you're ready to let me in there.
Where I wanna be is inside, deep inside your head. I want to be inside your
panties when I'm 100 miles away. I want to be in the shower with you while I'm
sitting next to my family at dinner, and I want to be in your bed when you
bring somebody home from the theater.
Fuck you.
That's why you're my good girl.
Thank you Sir. Do you have another question for me?
Yes. When was your last orgasm?
What it's none of your business.
Tell me tell me now.
OK, today's Friday, so it was Tuesday. I just got back from
a run. I was so tired.
How far did you go?
6 miles. I did the big loop around the train station, it's
flat and it's fast.
Kind of like you.
Cut that out.
You know I think you're beautiful I'm just teasing you.
You know I wish my boobs were bigger,.
No you don't. They're perfect just the way they are, just
the way you are.
What do you mean by that?
They are small, sensitive, and they fit inside my mouth, and
I can suck on them so hard.
May I touch them Sir? Please?
Be specific.
May I touch my breasts Sir?
Yes, you may, but only over your shirt.
What?
Just for now. Imagine we're in the movie theater. I can't
get you naked yet, but I can touch you, feel your nipples getting hard.
Ohh Sir, they are so hard right now.
Pinch one, the left and then the right.
Please Sir.
I time my touch with the action on the screen so you can
yell out as the cars explode and the men fight for some stupid reason. We
picked this one because the reviewers said it was unnecessarily loud for an
hour and a half and that's what I want you to be, loud.
May I?
May I what?
May I take my shirt off please?
Yes you may tell me how it feels.
It’s light blue T-shirt that's one of my oldest. It's and
it's soft and I like how it feels against my skin.
You may take it off if you tell me what happened next after
your run.
Yes Sir. I had the house to myself, so I stripped down as
soon as I walked inside the front door. My shoes first then my socks. My T-shirt
came off and then my running bra. I'm still not sure why I wear one, but I like
it.
Chafing is a bitch.
Come on Sir, you know I don't like that word.
I'm sorry my sweet, Chafing is unpleasant.
I took off my shirt and my bra I saw myself in the hallway
mirror.
Go on.
The one my grandma likes so much that she bought it at the
flea market last year after grandpa died.
Yes, I know that mirror. What did you see?
I saw my red hair, the small curves of my breasts. I saw
sweat running down between and I watched myself touch my nipples.
And? And what? Tell me.
It made me wet, so I reached down and I pulled my pants down
and my panties along with it until I was bare. I stepped out of my running
tights I stood naked in front of the mirror.
Yes continue.
Sir? May I?
What?
May I touch myself?
Be specific.
May I put my hands down my pants and touch my clit?
Yes, you may, but you cannot stop talking.
Thank you Sir. It feels good.
What feels good?
I like touching myself when I talk to you.
Tell me more. What did you see in the mirror?
Well I had just shaved that morning I was still a little red
but my skin was bare I could see my lips, so I used my fingers and I spread
myself open and then put one finger deep inside myself and that's all it took
to cum. Sir, just thinking of you and one finger was all it took.
You came from me in the hallway?
Yes, just you, a long run, and one finger, Sir.
Good girl, very good girl.
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OK, let's face it, if you are reading this, you like the sexy side of Blogger and you most likely watch porn.
A lot
Maybe not, but most people here are not looking for literary gold, deep stories, or the next War and Peace.
You are here to be entertained, to get off, to think about how you really want your sex life to be.
You come here to fantasize, and that's what porn is.
No one things that porn is a documentary, though, to be honest, most porn has a weaker storyline than an industrial training film, and it is very documentary focused, it films something happening with little commentary or context, and that's the problem.
Take THIS clip for example. It's a perfectly acceptable clip. The women are beautiful, they put a little effort into the setting and scenario, and orgasms are enjoyed by all, several times, if they are being honest, but that's not the problem. They don't talk at all.
I understand there is a time limit, apparently most men in America cum in 11 minutes, that's about the average clip length. Maybe that's how we have at lunch, maybe that's how long our kids are entertained in the other room, or maybe our wives get suspicious when the door is closed for over 12 minutes at a time. I don't know, but I'm sure there is more research behind the length of a free clip than there was research behind 6-foot distancing and make-believe paper masks.
But, I digress, my complaint isn't about clip length, I can cum in 2, 11, 20 or 30 minutes, that's not it.
I want dialogue.
I want to hear them. Porn directors need to realize that they can take their work from good (everyone cums) to great, just be having the actors talk to each other.
It is insanely sexy to hear them talk about the sex they are having, about what they want, about what feels good.
The audio is more important as the video. Not the screaming "Fuck me! Fuck me!" part, that's over the top and cliche, but it's the expressed desires that make it real. Let me feel like I'm invited into an erotic moment, not watching circus performers.
I want you to kiss me
Suck on my nipples
Put a finger inside me
Will you make me cum?
Can I cum for you?
Get on top of me.
Can I put your cock in my mouth?
I love the way you kiss me
I like how you play with my nipples.
Find me clit, latch on, and don't stop until I cum.
I like the way you feel inside me.
Can you add another finger?
Use your tongue on the tip, swirl it around.
Can I cum in your mouth?
Can we change positions? I don't want to cum too fast.
Maybe this is asking for too much, I don't expect great acting, but, what if the director sat down with the actors and said, "We want to hear your voice. If something feels good, say it. If you want something, ask for it, if you need your partner to do something, tell them. And if something isn't working, stay in the moment, redirect, and find something that works."
Consent is also incredibly sexy, and it doesn't have to be formalized and boring.
Anti-consent people portray consent as to people in business attire shaking hands and saying things like, "I would like to put my penis in your vagina and thrust for 90 seconds until orgasm, do you agree?"
That's not what I'm talking about.
I want to hear the give and take, the back and forth, the occasional negotiation. It's not complicated, it's just missing so often. And I don't expect porn to act as a role model for teenagers, but kids learn from porn, and it is mostly bad habits. Consent can get asked for and given in the heat of the moment.
I really want to suck your cock, I'd like that
Can I go deeper? Yes, it feels good
Will you bite my nipples, I like it a little rough, Tell me if it's too much
I want to fuck you while your partner watches. She's up for that, that's why we called you.
Come up on the bed with me, I want to see you naked. I've wanted this for a long time.
Put your finger in my ass, I like it. Can I lick it too?
I want you to fuck me. Really? YES, Where? Everywhere.
Where do you want me to cum? Inside, deep, hard.
Is this asking too much? What do you think?
I like story
This clip is a perfect example of a lost opportunity. First, what's up with the handshake at 2:45, is that the way women really shake hands? But, that's not the point.
This starts off great, we have a story, a conflict where the blonde (Anna) is jealous of her girlfriend (Vanna) spending too much time with a new "friend", Alexis. So far, so good. We establish an ongoing poly relationship between Anna and Vanna, there is tension over Alexis, and Vanna still goes off without Anna. Then Vanna brings Alexis home, trying to make peace and spark an apology 3-way.
They sit together, they flirt, they try to play nice. Sitting on the bed, Anna admits she might be open to the idea and Alexis playfully touches Anna's thigh. Vanna suggests that they try something together. The tension is rising, sex is in the mix, they are together and touching.
Anna asks (key point - consent and desire) to watch Vanna and Alexis kiss. "Let me see you guys kiss first."
THIS IS SO SEXY!!!
Vanna and Alexis kiss sensuously, Anna is watching and enjoys, it, and when the kiss ends, she says, "That wasn't too bad, I actually kind sof liked it."
Then Anna and Alexis kiss. Alexis then asks Anna to kiss Vanna. It is soooo sexy, so much tension and potential, and then, they make the cut that "ruins" it. After all this build up, this tension, relationship building, the very next second is Alexis tongue deep in Anna from behind.
ZERO transition, no escalation, no slow build,
0 to 60 in one cut and BOOM, the tension, the story, the conflict is gone.
Why can't we enjoy the build-up, the touching, the undressing, hearing Vanna encourage and support Anna in getting undressed, Vanna asking permission to go down on Alexis, honoring the primary relationship with sexy consent questions. Stay with the story!!!
Anna, do you want to help me undress Alexis?
Vanna, will you kiss Alexis's nipple while I watch?
Can I take your panties off?
Alexis, will you kiss my girlfriend? (This is powerful, put Anna in a position of importance, AND ask for sexual favors)
I want to eat you out.
Vanna, will you hold Alexis open for me?
Some of this sounds Dom/Sub-ish, but that's why power relationships are sexy, we ask permission, we gain consent, we say the sexy parts out loud. That same dynamic would make an average video sooooo much better.
That's my hope.
AND!!! I found a new pet peeve. With all of our technology, our expensive cameras, and beautiful women, why can't we hear people when they do talk. I ran through some videos the other day (OK, yesterday, sue me) and even when they did talk, you couldn't hear them!! They were talking and laughing and doing all the things I like, but you couldn't hear them! Oh the moaning and groaning was at volume 11, but the quiet moments, the little asides, the requests were all just a Bidenesque mumbles. So frustrating. (Perfect example, you can barely hear Lily in this clip. Here's another example - wonderful seduction for 3:30, then straight into strap-on dildo play! Give me some transition, please. Keep the seduction going.) Another horrible example of a sound editing failure. The whole video is about them talking, but you can barely hear anything.
AND, I'm not all complaints today. I LOVE this clip (hate the title). This is the slow burn wonderful clip that I like. It's tender, and slow, and feels like it might actually happen. and WOW, is ELLY CLUTCH hot or what?
That's it, that's my rant. I'm going to cum now. :-)
